How to write a better outreach email.
1. Write what you want to say.
2. Ask yourself what is the one thing I want the receiver to do after reading the email.
3. Remove everything that isn’t essential to reach that objective (most of what you wrote).
4. Send the email.
5. Follow up. Single shot marketing rarely works.
Let me know if your outreach emails work better. If you do this right they will.